User blog comment:Syazalina/Shana's Art School E-learning/@comment-7039146-20130710071737/@comment-10334808-20130711011859

AA sory for just can go into here XD

Wah I see a potential in ur drawing Dark,

Let me say the (-) things first:

-The line of the umbrella holder is somehow messy and its not straight like it used to be XD

-Both of her foot is somehow not correct (the anatomy is wrong XD)

Let me say the (+) things:

-I love her face, her eyes, her expression XD She just charming

-Her hair is quite nice already but if u can smooth the line it will look better :)

Over all I see, its really such a nice drawing, u really had improved a lot dark.

My advice:

-Draw it with more patient (u can draw while listening to music, when u feel u're tired u can rest for a while then continue on later)

-Draw it with love that u will happy and proud when ur drawing is done :)

-Regarding the shading better to use a wooden pencil (2B) or others that are better in shading, since ur shading still not clear

Congratz for ur improvement Dark, claps :)