Talk:"Greatest Show On Earth"/@comment-24668132-20140506070638/@comment-8142625-20140506121252

I like the pure too! The drawing style, colouring and design is nice!

I did spot a few problems:

1. the chest is not the same direction as the head or the waist. The waist is curved to the right, but the chest is facing us directly... (look at tie) Technically you can pose like this (3 body parts in 3 directions) but it can and will be awkward and painful

2. chest disproportional to the rest of her body (-3- we dont need to explain that)

3. when you make such a pose yourself (try it), her right neck shouldn't be so long. Her shoulder armour should be close to touching her ear. Plus her neck seemed to be thinner closer to collar compared to her neck width near her chin =w=