User blog comment:Syazalina/Shana's Art School E-learning/@comment-7039146-20130710071737/@comment-7039146-20130710080707

Ren said I should mention about this art work, so I do it XD

1. See red circle at her umbrella, the shading is wrong, it should be referred to the origin, so the shading must follow the blue lines

2. Umbrella holder should be like the green line, yours look a bit slanting

3. Her thumb which in red circle is too small

4. The ribbon looks a bit weird

5. Both legs & nees are too small

Whatever it is, GOOD JOB Dark (Y)