Thread:Ashlade/@comment-10665455-20130616000035/@comment-10259858-20130616010734

hahaha, you don't really need to challenge yourself like that idol, even a pro artist still flip their paper a lot to find a position which is comfortable to be drawn

ok, let's get to the point, shall we?

first, I'm not sure if you want to adapt subaseka art style in proportion, but normally, the arms have much volume, your drawing shows that the hand seems to be consist of bone only (it might even less than a bone, seems too thin for me). And try to give more into the body too, just like the arm.

I do not really see the hand other than metatron's left hand, try to work on the finger. The finger you draw seems like it shows a pointy claw instead of hand.

I'm not sure if you make it this way or not, but I feel like metatron's thights are really long, try to recheck them. But one thing for sure, Sandalphon's left leg is off, it seems that it does not connect to the body properly

Next is perspective I guess. Metatron and Sandalphon does not seems to be seperated that far, so their standing position should be more or less the same. When you take that into consideration, metatron's hand should be behind sandalphon's weapon, not in front of it (if you want to keep metatron in the front, you need to work on making sandalphon to be smaller to show that he is a bit farther away from metatron)

Last point, because your work is quite tidy, I'm not sure you use a sketch or not, do you use it?

(I want to point out using a stickman by redrawing the stickman over your drawing, but I left my tablets which makes me unable to do so... using mouse is an impossible task for me)