Thread:Akasha1908/@comment-7861076-20130803134248

sorry if this thing was late, I've been busy this days. I couldn't even come here to wiki...

well since I've already promised that I would be giving you this one so here it goes

Overview: (only the first 3 chapters)

Well the story was good, it is a mixture of comedy and all of Kazu's fetishes comes out xD

and also the failures of this two brothers is like LOL

and the two antagonist kid

Ren and Rin, I imagined them the way you described them and well they look totally cool.

and also Pochi looks so cute (my imagination again though the pics help)

I'll be sending my other reaction (to your chapter 4 & 5)  next week (maybe)

I'll just post it here or on your FB..

Other Reaction:

Kazu sounds gay here xD since he is so weak when it comes to men though it really fits.

I smell yaoi to both of them even though this musn't come to my mind. LOL, If they were to be a daemon Sasuke and Saizo would fit to both of them... 