User blog comment:TobiVida/Oneshot - Roar/@comment-9505008-20130805174532

Elegantly written, TV! I am always amazed at how expressive your writings are. Very well done. I also love the concept of fusing with your cards - reminded me of Megaman, actually. But... if I were to summon Ox Cart Moko, does that mean I'd turn all M? ...And into a woman?

On another note though, isn't the MC just a tad bit... angsty? I mean, if I were to make a quick/dirty summary, the story is basically about an agent who's whining in the middle of the night because his/her effort didn't pay off... and since the concept of trying "best" is subjective and the background information is limited, I personally couldn't feel much sympathy for the guy/girl.

Mmm... but now that I think about it, you could've been satiring the fact that amount of effort free players put into the game pales in terms of result compared to what the cash players obtain.

...I am probably reading too much into this lol. Great one shot, nonetheless!